Snippet of text from chapter 1. The italics denote text from the last time I sent a draft to xhai; the bold denotes the current version (which is still subject to change).
General changes:
General changes:
- General stylistic change for more fluid reading
- Finally settled on how I want to write Koushirou
- Most instances of double exclamation marks or ellipses removed when they interfere with readability
- Honorifics removed as per majority request